My Reflection Was to create a story with pictures to help us get ideas to write a story by ourselves . My next step is to find and make a better story with a bigger book.
You have some wonderful ideas and have used some descriptive vocabulary well to write an imaginative story. You are using some punctuation correctly. Well done! Next time re-read carefully so you can correct spelling, grammar and punctuation errors which will help the reader understand exactly what you mean.
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You have some wonderful ideas and have used some descriptive vocabulary well to write an imaginative story. You are using some punctuation correctly. Well done! Next time re-read carefully so you can correct spelling, grammar and punctuation errors which will help the reader understand exactly what you mean.
Fantastic effort with the story. Loved the descriptions and dialogue.
This story needs to go under the label of 'Writing' please.
Miss H
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